shollo

Personally i thought it was a bit duff. Little is advanced, and the use of the 'innocent' souls just removes a lot of what could have been.

I hope it gets a bit better, the basis behind the plot seems fine - just a rubbish intro.

I have to say that while i remain unconvinced by the ticking time bomb aspect of chas, as i feel it removes much of his charm (like being his apprentice - thank you hollywood) i do like the idea of a from the perspective of renee comic.

I think its difficult to define chas and johns relationship from within, as has been attmpted, but the POV of a character external to both may be able to bring clarity. That said, should it be defined?

Oh yeah, i'm new. Sorry abou missing letters - dodgy keyboard on a laptop. I try to catch em..... (and not film new either, just new here!)

Shollo

PS. I went with the 8 on 206, excellent cover, story let down IMO with some odd leaps in progression, yeah i know its a comic, but....